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the poet himself or his transcriber, ought, certainly, to be corrected, without any scruple, in the text. The mistake, which is common enough, proceeds from confounding “but” (only) with * except,” which must be followed by the accusative case. 170. All villains that do stand by thee are

pure. Posthumus says, “ It is I " That all th' abhorred things o'the earth amend, “ By being worse than they.” 172. Long live so, and so die !-I am quit."

I suppose, at length I'm quit.” 173. How shall's get it ?»

This ungrammatical expression occurs in Cymbeline:

“Shalls have a play of this ?” 174.“- Limited professions.

Legal professions, says Dr. Warburton ; but is it not, prescribed professions ? 178. Amen.

This, I suppose, was added by the actor. 179. O monument !

The exclamation“ (” is superfluous, here, but might be prefixed to supply the measure, in the line a little lower down: " O what an alteration of honour “ Has desperate want made in my noble master!"

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There is no time so miserable.· This, as Dr. Warburton has remarked, should be the speech of the Second Thief. 181. “ An honest poor servant of yours.” This is not metre: I suppose it was,

“A poor and honest servant of yours.” Tim. "

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182. “ So comfortable ? It almost turns.We might read, in measure,

“ So comfortable? It doth almost turn." 183. One honest man,but one;

“ No more, I pray." Timon is not only at enmity with mankind, but feels a gratification in entertaining that enmity, and deprecates any occasion to abate or mitigate it.

No more, I pray,--and he is a steward." This is a line only as it counts ten syllables ; to render it metre, another must be added :

But one; “No more, I pray,--and he is a poor steward.”

I fell rith curses." Some words are wanting : perhaps, these : Save only thee, I fell with bitterest curses."

If not a usuring kindness,&c. Kindness has fallen, by mistake, into this line, in awkward repetition, besides spoiling the verse :

“ Is not thy kindness subtle, covetous ?
“ If not a usuring? as rich men deal gifts,
“ Expecting,” &c.
184.“ My most honour'd lord.

No verse could begin in this manner. Flavius might have said, “O my dear lord, my ever honour'd master !

" Give to dogs

What thou deniest to men,” &c. The metre here is miserably deranged, and without necessity. I would read, “What thou deniest men: prisons swallow them.”.

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187. “ - An intent that's coming toward

him." A poetical design or invention. 188. " True.

When the day,&c. Whether this speech be assigned to the poet or painter, it should not proceed in this awkward manner. The word “ true” may easily be accommodated in the following line : “True, when the day serves, ere black corner'd

night.”

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The affectation and obscurity of the expression would seem to favour Mr. Theobald's conjecture that it belongs to the poetaster, but the painter is not free from the same impertinencies.

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Is another idle interpolation..

Something has been lost; perhaps, like this: "

Potent artificer, i “ 'Tis thou that rigg'st the bark,” &c.

" Fit I do meet them.Mr. Steevens very properly supplied the auxiliary verb do, in this hemistic. But why should the critic's care be confined to a hemistic, when it might reform the verse. The following fragment, as it stands, is as lame as the former: I would read, by an easy transposition only,

“ Fit I (do) meet them.” Poet. “ Worthy Timon, hail.”

I suppose a part of the Painter's speech has been lost:

“Our late and ever honour'd noble master.”

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Again “Sir” occupies, without any necessity, the place of a line :

“Sir, having oft your noble bounty tasted.”

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Not all the whips of Heaven are large

enough
What ! to you!

Whose,” &c.
This abruptness in the Poet's speech, and the
metrical irregularity, was studied.

" Whose star-like nobleness.· Thus in Macbeth:

“ Signs of nobleness like stars shall shine.” 190. With any size of words.

Some words are wanting. I would regulate
here;
' “With any size of words.”
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Let it go naked ;
“ Men may the better see and know it

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Again an awkward hemistic. I suppose, after
the Painter's words,

“ Came not my friend nor I,” the Poet added,

Indeed, my lord.

So, so, my lord.This is, indeed, so so; for so alone will give the metre.

“Thou counterfeitst most lively.” Paint, “ So, my lord.” 191. “ Marry, 'tis not monstrous in you ; nei- ,

ther wish I.

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