Hallow'd with sighs that burning lungs did raise; "Lo, this device was sent me from a nun, Which late her noble suit in court did shun, "But, O my sweet, what labour is 't to leave 228 Hallow'd] Thus Sewell. The original reading is Hollowed (i. e., carved), which in so stilted a context may be right. 229-230 What me your minister. . . under you] Whatever is under the control of me (who am your minister or slave) is at your service, works under your influence. With this punctuation some verb like "controls" has to be supplied from "obeys," thus giving "me your minister" a governing verb. 230 audit] final reckoning or account. "Audit" is thrice used in the Sonnets, iv, 12; xlix, 4; cxxvi, 11. comes] The singular verb has a plural subject "parcels," no uncommon grammatical usage of the day. 231 Their distract parcels sums] The separate items or details (of all these similes) in compound units. 234-236 Which late... coat] Who lately escaped from the solicitation of noble admirers at court, whose rare accomplishments caused the young nobility to fall hopelessly in love with her, for she was solicited by men of the highest lineage. "Coats" here means "coats-of-arms.” Cf. Lucrece, 205: "my golden coat" (i. e., my high lineage). 239-242 But, O my sweet... gyves?] This passage is obscure. The 230 240 Playing the place which did no form receive, 66 “O, pardon me, in that my boast is true: poet refers to the nun, and asks what merit is it to abandon that 243 to herself contrives] keeps to herself; keeps free from the contamination of the world. 250 Religious love] The bonds of love. Cf. Sonnet xxxi, 6: "dear religious love." 251-252 Not to be tempted... liberty procured] In order to escape temptation did she enter the cloister, and now she would claim her liberty in order to encounter all manner of temptation. The reading is due 250 "How mighty then you are, O, hear me tell! Have emptied all their fountains in my well, I strong o'er them, and you o'er me being strong, As compound love to physic your cold breast. "My parts had power to charm a sacred nun, "When thou impressest, what are precepts worth to Gildon, who edited the work in 1709. For immured and procured the original Quarto readings are enur'd and procure. Inured, i. e., hardened, may possibly be right; the word is twice used by Shakespeare: Lucrece, 321, and Tw. Night, II, v, 132. 254 The broken bosoms] The broken hearts. 258 us all congest] heap us together. 260 nun] Thus Malone. The original reading is Sunne, i. e., luminary (of the cloister). 262 Believed... begun] Yielded to her eyes when they, captivated by her lover, began to assail her chastity. 260 270 Love's arms are peace, 'gainst rule, 'gainst sense, 'gainst shame; And sweetens, in the suffering pangs it bears, "Now all these hearts that do on mine depend, To leave the battery that you make 'gainst mine, "This said, his watery eyes he did dismount, "O father, what a hell of witchcraft lies In the small orb of one particular tear! 271 Love's arms . . . rule] The working of Love gives lovers peaceful enjoyment, which outweighs breaches of rule, etc. 273 aloes] bitterness. 279 credent] credulous. 280 prefer... my troth] recommend and give security for, or guarantee, my fidelity. 281-282 his watery eyes. levell'd on my face] Again, as in line 22, supra, the eyes are likened to a gun on a gun-carriage. 280 But with the inundation of the eyes What rocky heart to water will not wear? "For, lo, his passion, but an art of craft, All melting; though our drops this difference bore, "In him a plenitude of subtle matter, Applied to cautels, all strange forms receives, Of burning blushes, or of weeping water, Or swounding paleness; and he takes and leaves, 290-291 the inundation... will not wear] Cf. Lucrece, 560, 592 and 959, where the destructive effect of water on stone or rock is again described. 293 O cleft effect!] O discordant or paradoxical effect! The Quarto reads wrongly Or cleft effect. 294 Both fire . . . extincture hath] From the lover's tear come both fire and chilling extinction of heat. The form "extincture" is not met elsewhere. Cf. 185, 66 supra: acture." 296 resolved] dissolved; a common usage. 298 civil fears] fears of decorum. Cf. Rom. and Jul., III, ii, 10: "Come, civil night." 303 Applied to cautels] Applied to insidious purposes. 305-308 swounding . . . swound] swooning. swoon. The Quarto 290 800 |