VENUS AND ADONIS VEN AS THE SUN WITH purple-colour'd face Had ta'en his last leave of the weeping morn, Rose-cheek'd Adonis hied him to the chase; Hunting he loved, but love he laugh'd to scorn: Sick-thoughted Venus makes amain unto him, And like a bold-faced suitor 'gins to woo him. "Thrice fairer than myself," thus she began, "The field's chief flower, sweet above compare, Stain to all nymphs, more lovely than a man, More white and red than doves or roses are; ... 1-2 Even as the sun the weeping morn] These lines are quoted derisively by the love-sick Gullio in the first part of The Returne 10 Nature that made thee, with herself at strife, "Vouchsafe, thou wonder, to alight thy steed, A summer's day will seem an hour but short, from Parnassus (c. 1600), III, i, 1053-1054. The last couplet of this stanza and the last four lines of the next stanza are similarly cited by the same writer in the same scene, lines 1006-1008 and 1020-1023. 2 weeping] This epithet suggests the dew of dawn. 66 3 Rose-cheek'd] This epithet was first applied to Adonis in Marlowe's Hero and Leander, line 93. Cf. Tim. of Athens, IV, iii, 86: rosecheeked youth." 9 Stain to all nymphs] Disgrace to all nymphs by the comparison. Cf. Sonnet xxxiii, 14: 'Suns of the world may stain when heaven's sun staineth." 11 Nature . . . at strife] This comparison of art and nature is a conceit characteristic of the poetry of all countries in the sixteenth century. Shakespeare constantly employs it. Cf. line 291, infra; Lucrece, 1374, and note; and Tim. of Ath., I, i, 40-41 (of a portrait): It tutors nature; artificial strife Lives in these touches livelier than life." 20 With this she seizeth on his sweating palm, And, trembling in her passion, calls it balm, Being so enraged, desire doth lend her force Over one arm the lusty courser's rein, She red and hot as coals of glowing fire, The studded bridle on a ragged bough To tie the rider she begins to prove: Backward she push'd him, as she would be thrust, So soon was she along as he was down, And kissing speaks, with lustful language broken, 26 precedent] prognostication or indication. Malone's correction of the Quarto reading president. Cf. Lucrece, 1261: "The precedent whereof." For lines 25-26 (the significance of a "sweating palm ") cf. Othello, III, iv, 33-35: “ This hand is moist, my lady. This argues fruitfulness and liberal heart," and line 143, infra. 30 40 He burns with bashful shame; she with her tears Forced to content, but never to obey, Wishing her cheeks were gardens full of flowers, Pure shame and awed resistance made him fret, Rain added to a river that is rank Perforce will force it overflow the bank. 53 miss] amiss, fault, misbehaviour. Cf. Sonnet xxxv, 7: "salving thy amiss." 56 Tires] pecks with hungry eagerness. Cf. 3 Hen. VI, I, i, 268–269: "like an empty eagle Tire on the flesh." 61 to content] to acquiesce. 71 rank] overfull, overflowing. Still she entreats, and prettily entreats, Being red, she loves him best; and being white, Look how he can, she cannot choose but love; Which long have rain'd, making her cheeks all wet; Upon this promise did he raise his chin, But when her lips were ready for his pay, Never did passenger in summer's heat "O, pity," 'gan she cry, "flint-hearted boy! 84 countless] Cf. Tit. Andr., V, iii, 156-159: "kiss for kiss... Countless and infinite, yet would I pay them." 86 dive-dapper] the dabchick or little grebe. 90 winks] winces. 80 90 |